First : I love your vision of characters and the situation (dont ever know originals characters) and it's improving impact on the public ^^. Good point and good choice.
The physic and technique are really good, there are some little mystakes or defaults, but in globality that's a good part, and you cover the sheet verry well ^^. I particuraly love your trees and hairs. You copes very well with anatomy and positions, but care with the perspective between the little girl and the man. We can believe than his leg and the child are in the same plan with his head or his second leg, and his book isn't really clear too. Where is the book ? On his left leg or in front of his bust ? We dont really know because of the hand holding the book doesn't overlap the left leg or other part of the picture.
Another point is the shadows. You can enhance its a bit to creat a more visible contrast between the luminous background and the gloomy foreground. I think if you add some shadows on the man and the closer girl (who's sleeping) you can improve a little bit the volume in your picture.
By the way, well done for the trees, the fire and nature overall. Love the grass o3o !
flyingcorpseintheskyFeatured By OwnerSep 13, 2012Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zbyt dawno nie byłam na twojej galerii ahhh ;_; Bardzo mi się podoba ta atmosfera, wygląda tak łagodnie <D Chociaż oświetlenie jest nienaturalne? To znaczy, można wytłumaczyć drugim ogniskiem, a poza tym łagodne cienie bardzo pasują do tej sceny, ale z backlightingiem wyglądało by to niezwykle magicznie ;v;"
a wiesz, nawet probowałam zrobić backlight ale chyba zle sie za to zabralam Q_Q palnęłam plamą na postacie i jakoś nie chciało dobrze wygladac xD''' wiec postanowilam udawac,ze jest drugie zrodlo swiatla (ta jasne, chyba świetliki OTL;; dziekuje >w<
This is a really amazing work, and I can only applaud you more and give you huge super hugs and kisses cause you didn't "cheat" with using a premade background, you created such a beautiful, unique, and your own environment for them to be in, This is totally what I love seeeeinggg~!! People not cheating.
I love the lighting of the trees and how the environment looks like you really want to run around in it, and have fun with nature. There faces are so beautiful, I love the different symmetry you put into there faces and there expressions are cute as well, it's like everyone is interacting here, and I adore that, with there body language and expression it comes together in a very nice and lovely picture.
The way you coloured it is very lovely as well. I know you asked for critique but I really don't see much that craves for attention. I'll search deeper in order to help you though~! becuase I love the beauty in you as an artist in wanting to learn and keep on learning.
The nice fireplace is beautiful as well, and the lighting it gives off it makes me want to roast marshmellows over the fire! You did such a wonderful job with the scenery thoughh Keeep up the good work~!
thank You for Your time to create such a nice commentary, it put a smile on my face and was such a heartwarming thing to read I always try to draw as much as I can from my head so I'm happy it shows somehow >//< I will always try my best!
Your welcome ^u^ I enjoyed commenting on your works, cause your truly a beautiful person artist and person and please keep that! Yes it does show, very beautiful job!!Keep on striving to keep on learning ^u^!! I am always rooting for you,
maybe its just me ... but what i see in this picture is a grown up version of Shippo in the middle (from Inuyasha btw.) and Kagome & Inuyasha's Kids next to him but maybe it is just because i recently started to rewatch the Anime Nice work!
This is really nice, I like the colors, texture and the style. But I'm not convinced by the light effect because it's night time and I can't see much the light or reflections of the fire... But It's great... Not much for a critique so I just comment what I think...
haha, why are they both groping him? I suppose the guy must be really uncomfortable, or not?... I love, love love the colouring. Somehow seems a bit less "soft" as your other works, not as perfectly blended, the brushwork left visible in some areas, I think it adds on some depth to the picture. Also, your use of the textures, it's just amazing. I can see you've used several textures/patterns in this one, but it doesn't look overdone at all; not in the foreground, int he grass; not over the campfire. It all just fits nicely together.