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By the Campfire by Razuri-the-Sleepless By the Campfire by Razuri-the-Sleepless
last contest prize for :iconkaido-san: ;3; I hope You'll like it Honey!!
from the left: Kaido, Myrrye and Veri from the story "Kadawer"
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Hello !

I dont really know how to start... :3.

First : I love your vision of characters and the situation (dont ever know originals characters) and it's improving impact on the public ^^. Good point and good choice.

The physic and technique are really good, there are some little mystakes or defaults, but in globality that's a good part, and you cover the sheet verry well ^^. I particuraly love your trees and hairs.
You copes very well with anatomy and positions, but care with the perspective between the little girl and the man. We can believe than his leg and the child are in the same plan with his head or his second leg, and his book isn't really clear too. Where is the book ? On his left leg or in front of his bust ? We dont really know because of the hand holding the book doesn't overlap the left leg or other part of the picture.

Another point is the shadows. You can enhance its a bit to creat a more visible contrast between the luminous background and the gloomy foreground. I think if you add some shadows on the man and the closer girl (who's sleeping) you can improve a little bit the volume in your picture.

By the way, well done for the trees, the fire and nature overall.
Love the grass o3o !

See u !
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
I don't seen similar image so far. These faces are a little strange for me, but rest is good.
Background are beautiful. Total: You did a good piece of work :)

PS. Sorry for my English. Greetings from Poland :)
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Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much for commenting!
Greetings from Poland as well ; )
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
:P :D

Przynajmniej sobie trochę angielskiego przypomniałem ;)
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Jaka głupia gafa XD
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SaijeeHiguchi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your art is sooo cute. Can I study your style?
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3deffect Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
nice work
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Ajax94 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Cute! :D
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rubyelizabeth Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
damn thought that was Kagome, Sesshomaru and Shippo with fox ears from Inuyasha
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Firlulet Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Już kończą mi się słowa na te wszystkie piękne prace ;-; To jest przecudowne *o*
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yukitora1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AWOESOME!


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