Color, color, color. I love your use (and balance) of it. Very vibrant. And I can't believe you're the one who did the 'lychee' manga cover! My eyes are fixed on your page. Your dedication is an inspiration.
Really cute, the twirl on her bangs and the braid are really nice. It was a neat effect how rather than tying up the braid at the end of it, it just extends and goes all over... that's cool.
Also while I'm typically a fan of blonde and green eyes... the actual shades/tones you used just give a different... look to it. GOod thing of course. Especially that green... it's like.. yellowey green... and... yea really neat. Nice shot.