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Rainy day by Razuri-the-Sleepless Rainy day by Razuri-the-Sleepless
this is a commission for :iconmissloonyluna:
OC's names are Josh and Jessica : )
I love drawing people with freckles so I enjoyed drawing them very much <3 the designs are lovely
If I finish at least one more of remaining commisions I'm going to open them today, stay tuned!
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comments appreciated!
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This picture is a nice scenery of a couple taking a walk in a rainy autumn afternoon. The idea with the girl pulling the umbrella to one side is really well thought and not at all standard! I almost can hear the sound of the rain dripping on an umbrella and smell the rainy air~

Especially the lighting is what strikes me most in the picture. The soft shades of blue and brown in hair and clothing rounds up the whole atmosphere of a rainy day. The characters' skin is painted with lots of patience and care and it seems you really dedicated a lot of time on details such as the freckles. The effect, that the skin looks so smooth in contrast to the clothes, which have a little harder shading is well done! Also the blurred backgroundes is very well done, as this is what it comes to when it rains xD

My personal favourite point would be the hands in the umbrella area :)

Some points I though are worth mentioning.
First there is the rain on the umbrella. It's not a big thing but normally, the raindrops falling on an object splash away a little to the sides, which of course gives a kind of mist around the top of the umbrella as you drew, but also little - do you say flyaways in this context? - drops of water bouncing away.
Second there is her hand, which is in itself well drawn but if she's supposed to grab the umbrella edge it should be turned farther to the inner side, so the spectator doesn't see the palm of the hand but rather the backside. In this position it seems a little hard to hold on to something ;)
As last point there would be that characters' facial expression. I cannot quite make out what they are actually thinking. He seems to be dreaming along whereas she has an expression inbetween smiling but being uneasy at the same time. Maybe it's due to the eyebrow on the right which is covered.. But in general I'd say that it might turn out even nice if they had a close connection to each other, be it eye contact or just the same direction they are looking at. This way they somehow seem unconnected, even though they go arm in arm.

I hope this was somewhat helpful for you :)
You have talent and skills, so please keep it up!!
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NYlights71 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Nice
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:iconpaciot:
Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Nice work.
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:iconrazuri-the-sleepless:
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much!
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:iconynotl8er:
ynotl8er Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
people with freckles are amazing
i dont have them but i add them to my characters
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CorgiFoxi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh I just love the guy's face and hair! And that's cute how the girl is scooting under the umbrella and holding onto his arm. :meow: And I think their freckles are cute too! =D
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JacobChilds Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
love it 
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apdarkness905 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
I love this picture well done, I've just discovered your work though and I have to ask, is this the only picture you've done of Josh and Jessica here or are there more?
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OmegaZzyzx Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
That's Merida and Hiccup. No questions asked. :)
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Adri-Mac Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful
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mrabudi Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww that's awesome!
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:iconrazuri-the-sleepless:
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you! :heart:
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flameheart10 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Beautiful and lovely. Nice job! :iconlainloveplz:
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Sabina-R Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Śliczni :3
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Gottabme Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great!!!!! I love it!!!!!!
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Aravil1 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
śliczne ^^
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MageFairy Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just beautiful. Awesome job! I'm trying to get better at anime, but I can't see me ever getting as good as you.
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PeytonJune Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
This is awesome
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Sagittarius-A-star Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's a very cute couple... :) I love how the girl is pulling the umbrella so as to cover her better. This is a lovely, romantic painting- guess there isn't anything like a young couple taking a walk on a rainy afternoon!!
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Mayeru Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
dīawww! i like very much >0<
my only critique it would be that... the girl has her half body outside the umbrella (at least thatīs what the perspective tells me ) and the jacket is not wet, neither her hand... so thatīs kinda odd. >.<
thatīs all!, keep up with the good work!.
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ELPHONY Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This pictue is wonderful, really well done and very impressive!
Somehow the face expression of the girl fascinates me.
Her face seems to be the center of the picture - a real highlight.
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Copperfrost Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww c:
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transparent-soul Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
This kind of reminds me of Lily Luna Potter and Hugo Weasley. XD
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PENCILSandMORE Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
I love this! they're both so well done! =D
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:iconzumea:
Zumea Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice, i like the rain
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Narchise Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This picture is so 90s. Like the kinda stuff they used to have in funky detective paperbacks when I was little. So very cool.
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LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I swear you've captured my dream guy!
He looks like a henry <3 but josh is good too
AWW THEY are so adorable!
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REcon36 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wooow I like this
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senpai-kaari Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really love your colored works.
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billytheixi Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
I love your coloring style! This is so sweet; the poses are so well done! :D
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KaiLovesSai Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
i watched it ;w;
totes worth it XD
<3
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NordicLynx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the freckles :)
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devALLjapan Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw wow, this one's fantastic! :clap:
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Starkidisthebomb Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Neon Fruit Salad Club Approves Greatly!!!
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Hallowrook Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Beautiful work!
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poiul123 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
very lovely :) i really like your coloring style :)
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:iconmeeowy:
Meeowy Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
neon fruit salad party woot!
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MiiBT Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwwww, the boy looks really cute ♥
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Wonderful
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kallu-wah Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing !:aww:
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Vannezza64 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student
LOVELY :D
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:iconrazuri-the-sleepless:
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You!
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Kazumi-U Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
So very cute!!!! XD
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:iconrazuri-the-sleepless:
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You very much!
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Kazumi-U Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
No problem! :D
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DenAndre Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012   Traditional Artist
Woah!Asfdsfgf!:iconasdfghplz: Saw this in your livestream...it's so cute!!! I really like the colors you used here! :iconiloveitplz:
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eda1102 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
I love it, especially the choice of colours, her scarf and coat, HNGH <33 totally lovely.
Seeing you shade it was a real treat for me!
I love how it works together the browns and blues, just lovely! <3
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Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You so much! ;w; recently I've been getting comments that my arts are getting too shinydesu and neon xD
*hugs the shit out of You* why u no visit warsaw
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eda1102 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
I think the big colourful thing you did for the Sai tutorial or smth was pretty much example of that, but those are nice summer-y colours, idk I like that colourscheme, too. : >
*hugs back* ugh, idk, man, moneyz (or lack thereof) and distance are in my way : < (I guess the same reason y u no visit bratislava, right?)
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cherii-hime Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
,fmas,dfn I WAS AT THE LIVESTREAM FOR THIS QAQ LOVELY <3
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Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You for staying with meeee ;3;
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