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Rainy day by Razuri-the-Sleepless Rainy day by Razuri-the-Sleepless
this is a commission for :iconmissloonyluna:
OC's names are Josh and Jessica : )
I love drawing people with freckles so I enjoyed drawing them very much <3 the designs are lovely
If I finish at least one more of remaining commisions I'm going to open them today, stay tuned!

comments appreciated!
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This picture is a nice scenery of a couple taking a walk in a rainy autumn afternoon. The idea with the girl pulling the umbrella to one side is really well thought and not at all standard! I almost can hear the sound of the rain dripping on an umbrella and smell the rainy air~

Especially the lighting is what strikes me most in the picture. The soft shades of blue and brown in hair and clothing rounds up the whole atmosphere of a rainy day. The characters' skin is painted with lots of patience and care and it seems you really dedicated a lot of time on details such as the freckles. The effect, that the skin looks so smooth in contrast to the clothes, which have a little harder shading is well done! Also the blurred backgroundes is very well done, as this is what it comes to when it rains xD

My personal favourite point would be the hands in the umbrella area :)

Some points I though are worth mentioning.
First there is the rain on the umbrella. It's not a big thing but normally, the raindrops falling on an object splash away a little to the sides, which of course gives a kind of mist around the top of the umbrella as you drew, but also little - do you say flyaways in this context? - drops of water bouncing away.
Second there is her hand, which is in itself well drawn but if she's supposed to grab the umbrella edge it should be turned farther to the inner side, so the spectator doesn't see the palm of the hand but rather the backside. In this position it seems a little hard to hold on to something ;)
As last point there would be that characters' facial expression. I cannot quite make out what they are actually thinking. He seems to be dreaming along whereas she has an expression inbetween smiling but being uneasy at the same time. Maybe it's due to the eyebrow on the right which is covered.. But in general I'd say that it might turn out even nice if they had a close connection to each other, be it eye contact or just the same direction they are looking at. This way they somehow seem unconnected, even though they go arm in arm.

I hope this was somewhat helpful for you :)
You have talent and skills, so please keep it up!!
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Nice work.
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much!
ynotl8er Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
people with freckles are amazing
i dont have them but i add them to my characters
CorgiFoxi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh I just love the guy's face and hair! And that's cute how the girl is scooting under the umbrella and holding onto his arm. :meow: And I think their freckles are cute too! =D
JacobChilds Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
love it 
apdarkness905 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
I love this picture well done, I've just discovered your work though and I have to ask, is this the only picture you've done of Josh and Jessica here or are there more?
OmegaZzyzx Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
That's Merida and Hiccup. No questions asked. :)
Adri-Mac Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mrabudi Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww that's awesome!
Razuri-the-Sleepless Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you! :heart:
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